1. The guiding question in the analysis is very clear.
2. The beginning of the analysis includes the words "Popular belief" which catches the readers eye because people like the thought of being popular, it appeals to them and causes them to want to know what could make them popular, so they can keep reading.
3. The subject is described in great detail especially for the amount that was completed so far.
4. The paper is not all the way complete but it gets the point across very directly and very quickly.
5. As you read the paper it becomes clear but it is not explicitly stated in a thesis.
6. The writer uses evidence from various websites and ads to support her analysis.
7. The sources that have been used in this analysis sound and appear credible and knowledgeable which convinces the reader to view the topic the same way as the writer.
8. No other perspectives have been used so far.
9.The tone is very knowledgeable and understanding of the topic which causes the reader to feel as if they are being taught by a teacher and they should believe everything that is stated in the analysis.
10. So far the analysis is designed very well and it is very easy to read.
11. The analysis is very organized and transitions very well into the next idea.
12. The style is very factual and is backed constantly with facts stated in the writing.
13. The draft hasn't concluded yet.
14. The title states very clearly that this is an analysis.
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