1.I don't see the guiding question in this rough draft.
2. The opening of the analysis catches the readers attention when it refers to rebelliousness because it intrigues the reader and they want to keep reading.
3.There is a lot of detail in the analysis that keep the reader interested and explains the analysis in a way that the reader can easily understand.
4. The analysis is very well done and the information is very well organized and stated.
5. Yes, the point of the analysis is very clear because it is stated and labeled before the analysis is actually started and then it appears again in the paper.
6.They provide a lot of evidence through magazine covers and sayings that the company's use to prove the analysis correct.
7. There are no sources cited.
8. There really is no counterargument when it comes to the words and pictures used in the ads meaning freedom and rebellion, which the analysis states.
9. The tone of the analysis is very knowledgeable and excited about the topic which portrays the interest of the topic that the writer has into the writing which makes the reader enjoy the writing.
10. The analysis is very well shaped and easy to read and understand because it is very organized and understandable.
11. The style of the paper is very appropriate for the audience it was written for.
12. There is a conclusion that was very well put and even starts with "In conclusion,", which makes the reader realizes that the topic is getting wrapped up and is coming to an end.
13. There is no title.
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